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Another tear by ~emogirl4emoboy:iconemogirl4emoboy:

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Another Tear

Sudden pain,
tears falling from my eyes.
I look down and see the blood,
that is coming from my wrist neverending.

Aonther tear falls down,
I can feel my life sliping away.
Should'nt it be great?
Its what i wanted, right?

Another tears rolls down my cheek.
Breathing gets harder.
I realize it's not what i wanted,
but it is already done.

Another tear.
Why did i do it i wander.
I was just a coward not wanting to deal with life.
But now that i understand its to late.

Another tear falls from my eyes.
I was so stupid,
wishing to take it back,
but cant.

My last tear,
in my mind im saying sorry to my loved ones,
in my heart i am wishing i could take in back.
Those are my last thoughts.
©2008-2009 ~emogirl4emoboy
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Author's Comments

i leaned that it is hard to deal with stuff and ppl fined there ways i found one that i regret and now i am stugling to stop to those who have found that way read and thank its hard to stop yes but if i can u can just try u want regret

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~kittyb78 Jun 27, 2008, 11:44:27 AM
sad yet touching.

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*black-banryu Jun 27, 2008, 1:25:33 PM
Very real.
:( they always say people realize when they're doing it that they dont want to. But its too late.
:hug: Well written sis.

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~dying-rosepetals Jun 27, 2008, 1:33:28 PM
Its so realistic and its true that people regret doing things while their doing them
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~emogirl4emoboy Jun 29, 2008, 4:06:59 PM
i know from first experins

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~emogirl4emoboy Jun 29, 2008, 4:07:47 PM
thanks i thought long and hard about it

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Yoji-chan
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~emogirl4emoboy Jun 29, 2008, 4:08:22 PM
k

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emo out,
Yoji-chan
have you hugged an emo today
:iconkittyb78:
~kittyb78 Jun 29, 2008, 4:13:13 PM
k

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I BELIEVE IN JESUS CHRIST AND I AM PROUD OF IT!!! :D ／l、 [ニャン]
（ﾟ､ ｡ ７
　l、 ~ヽ
　じしf_,)ノ [ニャー
:iconemogirl4emoboy:
~emogirl4emoboy Jun 29, 2008, 4:14:41 PM
:}

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emo out,
Yoji-chan
have you hugged an emo today
:iconkittyb78:
~kittyb78 Jun 29, 2008, 4:24:25 PM
;}

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I BELIEVE IN JESUS CHRIST AND I AM PROUD OF IT!!! :D ／l、 [ニャン]
（ﾟ､ ｡ ７
　l、 ~ヽ
　じしf_,)ノ [ニャー
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